“Still quoting kitchens off the top of your head?”
It opens by calling out the buyer and naming the pain in the first second. Then it proves the fix with your real portal screens and your real kitchens, closes on your guarantee, and ends with one clear instruction.
Silent on purpose. Add a track from Meta’s Sound Collection when you upload (see notes below).
- 0–3sCall-out + painA bare new-build kitchen from your reel. “Attention builders & cabinet makers: still quoting kitchens off the top of your head?”
- 3–6sAgitateYour installers mid-fit. “Some jobs you win on. Others? You barely break even.” (your own words from the landing page)
- 6–12sThe fixYour VIP phone catalogue landing on Add to cart, then the real material selector with Laminex, Polytec and TekForm swatches.
- 12–15sProofThe live price panel from your portal, showing cabinet by cabinet up to the total. “What you see on screen is what you pay to have it cut, edged & produced.”
- 15–19sBefore / afterA real VIP job: the tired cream kitchen, then the white shaker fit-out. “Most orders done in 7–10 business days.”
- 19–25sGuarantee + testimonial“Miss our date? You get 10% off. No questions asked.” Then Jodie’s review: “Very Impressive Professionalism.”
- 25–29sOne instruction“Price your next job free.” Register free, with the Trade (ABN) and DIY options shown.
Three statics, three different reasons to sign up.
Kennedy’s rule is to test the message, not the colour of the button. So each ad makes a different argument: the pain of quoting blind (trade), made-to-fit proof (DIY), and the guarantee. Run all three and let the cost per sign-up pick the winner.
“Why Settle For Off-The-Shelf Cabinets That Don’t Fit?”
Primary text
“Done On The Date We Promise — Or You Get 10% Off.”
Primary text
Real proof beats polish. Specifics beat slogans.
Call out the buyer, then twist the knife
“Attention builders & cabinet makers” stops the right people. “Some jobs you win on, others you barely break even” is your own line, and it’s the pain they feel on every quote.
Show the real thing
No stock photos and no mock-ups. Real price panels from your portal and real kitchens you fitted out. A tradie can smell a stock photo from a mile away. They can’t argue with a real job.
Take the risk off the table
“On time or 10% off, no questions asked” and “register free” answer the two objections every new portal faces: will it actually turn up? and what will it cost me to try?
Straight-talk notes.
About the creative
- Sound: the reel is silent on purpose. Your original reels carry music that may not be licensed for paid ads. In Ads Manager, add a track from Meta’s Sound Collection, which is cleared for ads.
- Portal screens come from your 23 Sep teaser. The demo job in it shows pricing dated Feb 2025, so if your prices have moved, send me a fresh screenshot and I’ll swap it in.
- The $2,970 + GST example in ad 03 is taken from your landing page. Please confirm it’s still current.
- Testimonial uses Jodie’s first name only, from the review on your site.
- Feed-safe: all reel text sits inside the 4:5 area, so it also runs cleanly in Facebook and Instagram feeds.
3 quick fixes on your landing page before it goes live
- Hero headline typo:
ZERO HEADCHESshould beZERO HEADACHES. - The FAQ says cutting and edging happen in
our local Smithfield factory. Your site lists you at Stapylton, so worth checking this isn’t leftover template text. - FAQ typo:
Blumor Hettich hingesshould beBlum or Hettich hinges.
A simple first test on Meta.
| Setting | Suggestion |
|---|---|
| Objective | Leads or Sales, optimised for portal sign-ups (Complete Registration event) |
| Ad set 1: Trade | South East Queensland, 25–60. Interests: builders, carpentry, cabinet making, construction. Reel + ads 02 and 04. |
| Ad set 2: DIY | South East Queensland, 28–65 homeowners. Interests: home renovation, kitchen design, DIY. Reel + ads 03 and 04. |
| Placements | Advantage+ placements. The reel covers Reels, Stories and Feed; the 4:5 statics cover Feed. |
| Landing page | vipcabinets.com.au/lp/, which already splits Trade and DIY, so it matches the ads. |
| Judge it on | Cost per registration after about 7 days. Kill the weakest message and put the budget behind the winner. |